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I appreciate all of you discussing this crazy business. For more, here's Joshilyn's take on the issue over at Lipstick Chronicles, with more discussion in the comments: http://thelipstickchronicles.typepad.com/the_lipstick_chronicles/2011/08/writer-pants.htmlLydia Netzerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11448861273955788158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-28044395985521209562011-08-05T11:09:47.649-04:002011-08-05T11:09:47.649-04:00I think--I defer to Lydia, of course, since these ...I think--I defer to Lydia, of course, since these are HER words--but I think key word in the passage: "I had decided that I was not going to be some sort of annoying prima donna. I told myself that I was going to be a good girl and not argue, and that I would take every suggestion and try and make it work in the book." is TRY. She doesn't say she was resolved that she WOULD make all suggestions work, just that she would seriously consider them and try them out to see if they in fact did work for the story she wanted to tell.<br /><br />I think it's VERY important to find an editor that you trust and who loves your story. But an editor who has been willing to pay actual cash to buy your book? You can pretty much bet that they DO love the story. Which means that you should seriously consider their advice, since it comes from a place of love and wanting the book to be the best it can be. <br /><br />Just from my own experience of working with my editor, I would say that she was right 90% of the time. And that was cool with both of us--my editor (and I think any really great professional editor) will be very clear that her comments are suggestions, not commands.Anna Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13900069052310375058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-83861779859438888312011-08-03T07:44:56.565-04:002011-08-03T07:44:56.565-04:00PAX, Lexi, PAX! Stand down! -- This could turn int...PAX, Lexi, PAX! Stand down! -- This could turn into an e-peen experience if we are not careful! LOLSY I have not been in one of those since I was a dewy 25, and the internet was even newer and pinker than me. We are better than that now, you and I!<br /><br />You are speaking in the general. And you were applying your personal general rule to her specific. As a person living inside the world of her specific, I am saying to you, "If you read this as her giving intellectual and emotional control of her book away, man, you do NOT know Lydia..."<br /><br />It isn't a point for discussion. You do NOT know Lydia, and pull quotes won't change that. That's just a fact. I was not challenging your general point at all...I was just making an amusing and apt tiger metaphor about my particularly ballsy friend.<br /><br />Although, NOW I kinda wanta challenge your assertions, if it can be an interesting discussion and not a snippy REDDIT style thing about preening... <br /><br />I do actually, respectfully, not-snippily, and fundamentally disagree with you.<br /><br />I think I have to go blog about this and explain why.Joshilynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11078154024217834176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-27333208457528507202011-08-02T15:13:44.556-04:002011-08-02T15:13:44.556-04:00Joshlyn, as I said, I don't have a problem wit...Joshlyn, as I said, I don't have a problem with advice, whether I decide to take it or not. <br /><br />I don't know Lydia. But she said, <br /><br />"I had decided that I was not going to be some sort of annoying prima donna. I told myself that I was going to be a good girl and not argue, and that I would take every suggestion and try and make it work in the book." <br /><br />To me, that sounds overly accommodating. But then it's none of my business; it's not my book...Lexihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14404818053292364819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-79385028875119832062011-08-01T18:49:24.954-04:002011-08-01T18:49:24.954-04:00Lexi, I respect your viewpoint. It is YOUR book, i...Lexi, I respect your viewpoint. It is YOUR book, in the end. But wow have you read Lyd wrong. :)<br /><br />I think you mean REALLY well and want to protect the idea of the artist's ownership of their work, but I think you are maybe reading your own fears into her experience? <br /><br />I will say this: I've known Lydia for YEARS, and as her crit partner, it is kinda hysterical to think of Lydia being deferential, or changing a SYLLABLE if she did not believe in EVERY molecule of her being that the change will help make HER vision clearer and more whole. HERS. Not mine. Not her other critters'. Not her Editor's or her agent's. HERS.<br /><br />For me, your comment is like...Say we are watching a tiger eat a little grass in order to make the whole antelope carcass it swallowed earlier move along, and a person comes up during the grass eating part alone and says to the tiger "Hmmm, I dunno... maybe You don't want to go WHOLLY vegan, you know? Maybe keep CHEESE."<br /><br />Meanwhile, the tiger is burping hearty, satisfied meat burps and saying, LOOK AT ME COMPROMISE!"Joshilynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11078154024217834176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-82652081392513451382011-08-01T18:30:53.430-04:002011-08-01T18:30:53.430-04:00It's all good to stand up for your book and to...It's all good to stand up for your book and to own your ideas. However, here is something to consider: You need whoever is out there selling your book to absolutely love it and not have any "Well, if she had only fixed this" reservations. So whether it's an agent selling it to editors, or an editor selling it to booksellers, or whatever, it is definitely in your best interest to have that person feeling very confident in the novel, and not hung up on what they consider to be glaring errors. <br /><br />Let's break it down even more than I did in the original post. When my editor came back with changes, she had about six things she wanted me to work on. Two things I did exactly what she said. Two more things I addressed the problem she was having, but in a different way. One thing I really worked around and around, and struggled with, and finally a friend came up with a different solution that everyone loves. The final thing, I ended up telling her I couldn't really do. She was fine with that -- when she gave me the revision note on that, she told me it was not absolutely necessary. But you can bet I considered it seriously, turned it over and over in my mind, and really tried to find a way to make the book better.<br /><br />Authors who ponce around saying, "My little darling diamond-studded heart-covered bookypoo is perfect in every way, and no mean dumbheaded editor is going to change it!" (not saying this is you! just some people!) are doing their own books a disservice. It can always be better. It can always weather changes to improve it. And if the industry professionals who are going to bring it to market have advice for how to do it, it's a good idea to listen hard. :)Lydia Netzerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11448861273955788158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-7759727225002624822011-08-01T16:52:42.295-04:002011-08-01T16:52:42.295-04:00Lydia, I'm fond of advice, and always consider...Lydia, I'm fond of advice, and always consider it, but I believe in trusting my gut. My book will go out under my name, not a beta reader's, an editor's or an agent's (should I have such a thing).<br /><br />I think it's a mistake to be too deferential or trusting. Yes, an outside opinion can be hugely helpful, but unless one agrees with a suggestion, however august the source, there's no reason at all to make changes. It's your book, not anyone else's.Lexihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14404818053292364819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-37932006165259363462011-08-01T09:22:04.233-04:002011-08-01T09:22:04.233-04:00Lexi and Gehri, hi! :)
First let me clarify that...Lexi and Gehri, hi! :) <br /><br />First let me clarify that here I'm talking about responses and suggestions from my editor and my agent, and also three beta readers (all of them NYT bestselling authors) who had been "saved" to read the book until I considered it done. So it's not like I was slavishly executing every change recommended by a critique group or random people strolling by my novel. ;D :D<br /><br />But I hear what you are saying. Even from these people, all of whom did "get" the novel and were definitely in sync with what I was trying to do, I couldn't incorporate every suggestion they made. However, the important thing is that I responded to every suggestion in some way. <br /><br />If someone you trust, or someone who has authority in some way (like your editor or agent) has a problem with something in the novel, you have to address it, or you're being foolish. Even if you can't do the fix that's been recommended, you have to work very hard to find *something* that helps. Rather than looking at the fix and figuring out "will this work, oh my goodness, this will never work!" you look at the root of the problem and figure out a way to improve whatever is causing the issue. <br /><br />When you're drafting, I firmly believe in keeping to your vision and never doing anything to your book that doesn't come straight from you. However, when you get to editing, and you get to the end stages of your process, things change. Digging your heels in and saying "It's my novel, I'll cry if I want to," is a naive and irresponsible. When trusted readers raise an eyebrow, you have got to think hard about the reason why.Lydia Netzerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11448861273955788158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-28846550389629466152011-08-01T08:37:51.620-04:002011-08-01T08:37:51.620-04:00I'm asking the same thing as Lexi, did you eve...I'm asking the same thing as Lexi, did you ever say no. The impression that you give is that you took every suggestion and incorporate it.<br /><br />Every suggestion could not have been infallible.<br /><br />But also, did you not feel that you have a specific story to tell in a specific way. Didn't you say things a certain way even though it felt wrong to every reader because that was the way you wanted to say it because that was what the story needed?<br /><br />Just asking. I don't respond well to suggestions from people who read something else than what I am writing.Gerhi Feurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14505154000653208272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-33968483888799792452011-07-31T16:52:21.109-04:002011-07-31T16:52:21.109-04:00Fantastic post!! Thanks so much for sharing. Writi...Fantastic post!! Thanks so much for sharing. Writing is a craft, and many people touch a book before the end. :) It is a team effort.Dawn Kurtagichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05050668572755966474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-69927772330571333602011-07-31T16:27:23.949-04:002011-07-31T16:27:23.949-04:00Lydia, did you ever say, "No"?
Because ...Lydia, did you ever say, "No"?<br /><br />Because as a writer who's been on several peer review sites, I know advice can range from suggestions so good you can't wait to incorporate them, to the deranged from people who clearly don't 'get' the first thing about your book.<br /><br />And it is ALWAYS a mistake to try to be a good girl.Lexihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14404818053292364819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-17940421184472314092011-07-30T10:57:47.655-04:002011-07-30T10:57:47.655-04:00Ann, yes! I think a lot of times writers (myself i...Ann, yes! I think a lot of times writers (myself included) find themselves chasing the symptoms of a problem without really looking for the root. Maybe if I rush around and bandaid everyone's issues, it'll be fixed! When really there's something more significant lurking. <br /><br />Like you mentioned, the response "Why does she think this? maybe I should rework that..." is the proper diagnostic approach, especially if more than one person has a problem with something in the book. A lot of writers get, I think, frustrated by conflicting opinions from early readers. However, if you back up (of course easy to say but hard to do!) and look at the big picture, you can usually say, hmm, trouble is swirling around this character in multiple ways, maybe something needs to fundamentally change here. And sometimes that's even easier to execute, once you identify it, than it would be to rush around sticking fixes on all the little manifestations. <br /><br />And, welcome to the blog! Thanks for reading. :)Lydia Netzerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11448861273955788158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-30064116416839258312011-07-30T10:07:08.678-04:002011-07-30T10:07:08.678-04:00As an editor, I feel like the short version of nea...As an editor, I feel like the short version of nearly all my comments is "I think you mean <em>this</em> here. Is <em>this</em> what you mean?" then the writer can say "Yes, yes!" or "No, I mean <em>that</em>"--but hopefully they're thinking, "Why does she think <em>this</em>? Maybe I should rework that." Translating any of this from brain waves to words is hard, and it takes a few passes.Ann Marie Gamblehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15524023358327369037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-60641846838599667322011-07-27T21:07:53.215-04:002011-07-27T21:07:53.215-04:00Thanks Carrie! Sometimes a crayon is the first thi...Thanks Carrie! Sometimes a crayon is the first thing that comes to your hand, you know? Heh.Lydia Netzerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11448861273955788158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2549813151360063120.post-6668991694191584492011-07-27T16:54:41.406-04:002011-07-27T16:54:41.406-04:00Thank you for writing such an insightful post! I r...Thank you for writing such an insightful post! I really enjoyed reading through the process. <br /><br />By the way, I love the crayon. ;)Carrie Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01540590799406170410noreply@blogger.com